Warning: The following is a rewrite of a deleted review from years ago and contains blacks rocks shooters criticism profanity and a score below 5/10. Reader discretion is advised. Black Rock Shooter has had an interesting rise to prominence beginning with a mere illustration that spawned into a music video by famous vocaloid persona Hatsune Miku whose attire was inspired from these illustrations. An OVA was released in 2010 based on the music video much to the pleasure of many vocaloid fans that caused a ridiculous amount of hype surrounding the project that naturally left a lot to be desired. From there the franchise created their own line of figurines and a video game before finally returning to anime two years later putting smalltime animation studios Ordet and SANZIGEN in charge of the project to expand the franchise further than ever before culminating in a TV series composed of 8 episodes in early 2012. Rarely does an anime come to fruition from a tangled background like this the majority of anime use manga or light novels as source material to base a show around. Because of such questions are bound to arise about the narrative characters structure and other elements in regard to a show when it has such a vague and almost convoluted history like this. Black Rock Shooter is a prime example for why such questions and concern about similar circumstances are justified by being one of the most peculiar anime Ive seen and not in a good way. The TV series of Black Rock Shooter focuses primarily on two characters and two worlds. One being the human world where two schoolgirls Mato Kuroi and Yomi Takanashi go about their normal lives and first befriend each other. The alternate world is more of a mystery coming off as a stylized barren wasteland where the enigmatic fighter known as Black Rock Shooter wanders across the land fighting for seemingly no other purpose than for her own survival. Unlike the OVA this series does attempt to show that characters between both worlds are connected with BRS and other fighters acting as the personas of characters in the real world providing an intriguing distinct expression into how characters honestly feel about each other. Unfortunately the show was unable to capitalize on this at all with the 8 episodes they had from the very start. The first episode gives a couple lines of exposition on the relation between both worlds which is an improvement from the OVA which had no focus on the topic whatsoever but this is the only time when said link is ever touched upon. Looking back its kind of pathetic how production didnt bother to do anymore with this concept considering that Black Rock Shooter is a series that relies on relationships and links but they did the bare minimum when it came to the most important relationship of all with the self. Constantly characters are shown to have their own inner conflicts that are expressed through battles within the alternate world yet there is an ongoing disconnect between these settings that has a damaging effect on these parallel stories as each on their own have nowhere near enough content and focus to stand on their own. The story of Black Rock Shooter is nothing special Mato Kuroi has just entered middle school and she is looking for friends eventually befriending Yomi Takanashi a shy aloof girl initially through their shared interest in a picture book. Slowly Yomi becomes more open with Mato as the show goes on until plot twist Yomi has another best friend and she isnt happy with Yomi talking to other girls Oh my god what drama Honestly its just a silly middle school girl drama that takes itself way too seriously and has no real entertainment value that warrants much attention. At least if it stuck with only focusing on the two main characters then maybe I wouldnt have such a problem with the plot but Black Rock Shooter does not care about being a disjointed mess. After the halfway point the show takes a turn off a cliff as more characters are introduced with little screen time only to never get a mention again. More plottwists and backstories are added to give the story more shock value that no one cares about at this point and it all bundles together to form this perplexing piece of work that both insults your intelligence with how simplistic it can get yet confuses one with so many plot points unanswered to the point where viewers are no longer watching for the plot and only for the action. Which brings us to the alternate world of Black Rock Shooter: This setting is a complete change in presentation showing a vibrant yet desolate realm that is supposed to represent the mentality of middleschool girls chaotic turbulent dangerous where peace among fellow wanderers is not an option. Its kill or be killed here. All the focus here is action and it is easily the best part of the show. The directing use of CGI and choreography were all impressive here and a keen eye for detail was present with every battle. Sadly I would argue these scenes act as a doubleedged sword for Black Rock Shooter. On one side its certainly visually impressive and the only parts of the show I would ever recommend watching but what these scenes do is take away precious time that should have been used to tell the actual story at hand. As far as Im concerned the action is second to the main plotline and if the narrative here is rendered to shit because the staff wanted to add more cool action scenes I dont see how that makes the show better. All it does is turn the series into one where you can only enjoy if you turn your brain off and what makes that any better than looking at a fucking brick wall? It doesnt help that most of the action scenes are jumbled together with scenes from the human world and ends up clipping the actual story with horrendous transitioning that makes it all feel worthless. Maybe if they actually put emphasis on how the two worlds correlate then maybe people would care about what happens in these scenes but that seems like an impossible scenario considering the staff couldnt fucking do it right a second time with 3 hours to work with Black Rock Shooter has a very poorly constructed storyline that feels like a case of a show trying to accomplish much more than what time given would allow but taken to the extreme and doesnt bother to focus on telling a coherent plot in the process. But as bad as the plot may be the characters are arguably even worse. These young girls are both simple yet redacted let me explain. Both main characters are fairly generic with Mato being an outgoing girl with a strong sense of loyalty and Yomi being an introvert wary of getting close to anyone due to a tragic past. The two easily contrast each other and are in no way memorable until they begin showing signs of stupidity that does not match their personalities. The way these two react to everything around them is unnatural they exaggerate to any problem they face and never try and think about it rationally. Whether it be Mato constantly yelling at every minor problem in her relationship or Yomi getting the crazyeye expression one would compare with an anime character about to commit suicide these two are atrocious when portraying appropriate feelings. This is why I call them redacted even for teenage girls they come off as incompetent whenever the slightest bit of conflict occurs in either of their lives. The cheesy dialogue does these girls no favours and only further implies that they have mental issues. This is also seen with the underdeveloped characters that are shown for 2 minutes before disappearing from the show but I found the main leads to be unbearable. For a show that relies on emotions there was always a feeling of disconnect between what was happening onscreen and what was happening in subtext. And now after bearing witness to all of their actions I can easily say that these are two of the most overdramatized lesbian characters I have ever seen so bad that even the LGBT+ community doesnt acknowledge them. For the most part Black Rock Shooter looks like one of the most bland and uninteresting anime in recent memory if you exclude the alternate world. The characters all look sloppy with a sketchy artstyle with no identity of its own and some laughable attempts at highlights. The animation here just looks cheap as if all of the budget when into the action which barely took about 1/3rd of the series. The lighting was actually commendable when used in the more traumatic scenes creating a believable aura of uncertainty that helped enhance these moments if only on a technical level but otherwise it was forgettable and almost absent for the remainder of the show. However the action scenes are on a whole other level showcasing some of the best CGI implementation I have seen in an anime and homes some marvellous camerawork and fight composition that makes me wonder why the entire show wasnt in CGI. When comparing the two diverse artstyles it makes what was handdrawn look more and more like a piece of shit one of the rare cases where an anime has crappy handdrawn animation with stunning CGI animation. Soundwise it was fine: voiceacting soundtrack and audio effects were all passable except for the opening. The opening was sung by supercell featuring everyones favourite vocaloid Hatsune Miku and while some will definitely enjoy the opening its one that feels out of place with this show and one that I can easily say is not for me. Black Rock Shooter was ultimately another attempt for people to try and make a quick buck off a rising trend and now that the fad has quietly calmed down I hope that people can see what a pile of utter shit this series it. A successor to a shitty OVA that slightly improves on the material in some ways only to make the plot even more confusing characters even more infuriating and an impression on similar works where I expect such to be a complete waste of time. Theres a lot of things I fucking hate about this show but what really pushes me to the edge is part of the fanbase that find it d33p and that if you didnt like it then you obviously didnt get it... To anyone who belongs to this group: Trust me we all got what it was aiming to be but what actually happened is a different story. We dont get it? Maybe you dont get that a show which tries to be an internal character study can also completely fail at it. And with that said I leave you all with the final verdict. Black Rock Shooter where have you gone? TO THE HALL OF PAIN BITCH REST.. IN PISS