The story is kind of disappointing. This girl is full on bullied to the point its malicious. Its really over the top and normally Id find myself complaining about it. But it was kind of interesting in this story. I love the idea of some type of monster coming across the girl and mutating her slowly. With her having to hide it and it slowly becoming worse. Maybe eventually she learns to stay in her human form. But in this She just swallows a Wasp Gains a Stinger and makes a Harem of loyal girls. The last part doesnt sound bad But its really fastpaced and the horror and the transformation of the MC isnt great and is kind of boring. Again Im kind of sad she only got a Stinger but nothing else. I still want to see her slowly transform into a Monster that is Half Wasp/Human. Her slowly getting followers but it is lacking in any horror or excitement. It really is just a poke and its done. I wouldve loved to see some of the victims trying to escape or them struggling as they start becoming loyal to the MC. In the end It quickly turns to shit. The Government for some reason already knows of the Wasp and that really is one of the worst parts. It ruins the horror and the story quickly becomes just a generic story with Evil Government Men and they want control of X for more POWER Ive seen stories like that and its always annoying. Then for some reason I cant understand. It starts getting into things akin to Radial Feminism. Its really quite jarring since the story wasnt good but it was solid It had a foundation. But this is so weird. It starts saying stuff like how men are actually the inferior and that things like Evolution are wrong because for some reason women working the fields of farms while the men went out to do the hard labor was somehow wrong? I mean For the time it actually makes sense why women were the ones to stay home. Men were the ones able to handle more physical things than women on average. This is just such a weird thing to add to a story. I wish we instead got a more horror story about some bullied HighSchool girl slowly turning into something like HalfHuman and HalfWasp PLEASE NOT IN THE STYLE OF THE FLY WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU JEFF GOLDBLUM?? As she starts to become stronger and starts gaining more of an image of a Queen. I imagine the kind of gets more of a mature body with things like wings and Retractable Attenae and a normal looking jaw at first but is actually mandibles. Then things like a natural instinct to start to gain followers. Also Have it more in a desolate area like an Island and DONT have the government besides Police get involved. Maybe near the Climax The Military comes in because of weird shit going on. I like to picture it as the Military in the Movie The Mist Really I am just disappointed. Feel free to still give it a look but if you came in with anything like my expectations then you will probably be disappointed.
45 /100
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