Main problems: 1. The main formula of happenings specifically with the enemies of the MC: First: Outside dedicated villains basically most random people he meets are turbo perma SEETHING assholes that randomly appear in front of the MC. Second: They act like assholes and treat him like shit. Third: He taunths them they seethe. Fourth: He BTFOs them they seethe but then apologize staking their life they will become better. Fifth: He lets them live. Then the moment they escape his eyes in the next panel they stake their life that they will literally do everything in their power to kill him and his family and they continue to seethe. Repeat that same sequence of events with the same villain one or two more times depending on the size of the character of the villain until the MC either finally kills the villain or more likely he just never appears again... It just gets annoying seeing the amount of seething enemies faces every third panel basically the pinnacle scene explained below: MC saves a couple hundred people from CERTAIN DEATH amongst them a few of those random nobody assholes who just hate the MC later when the MC is getting thanked by the leaders of the group of the people who he saved those assholes are literally in that moment seething about HNNGG WHY IS HE GETTING THANKED... He only saved their and your lives why get any recognition for it... right...? Note that the faces of enemies while they are seething are drawn the same and very dramatically every single time. 2. The fights: Up until chapters 6070 every single fight has no weight to it and no critical moments in it at no point is the MC shown to shit himself at no point does he seem like he is in any danger at no point does he learn anything during a fight unlock a new power and use it or similar. The fights just happen after a random enemy appears in his path they exchange a few attacks he wins we move on there is no weight to them at all. 3. The MC cultivation/improvement part along with the power/hierarchies system: Now this doesnt need to be a big part of the story but this very obviously is a martial arts cultivation type manhwa so the world needs to be developed at least somewhat in this direction but it isnt almost at all. The hierarchies and the power system is rarely talked about in any concrete sense only vague mentions of a few groups of existing powerful people here and there without ever visualizing the hierarchies and ever giving any numbers that would give the reader the sense of scale of the world and the martial artist in them. Given that the cultivation and character learning and improvement is harder to track it also isnt explained well or in any depth even when it happens. Mostly the MC at random points just has the new power after saying its name in the previous panel. If you want to read some average murim manhwa and have read most of the others already then you can also read this to further scratch that murim itch otherwise... just read something else.
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